sour_idealist: (Default)
[personal profile] sour_idealist
Title: Neurons of Murderous Dancers
Fandoms: Inception & Black Swan
Characters/Pairings: Lily, Nina, Beth, Thomas, Erica, Ariadne, Arthur, Eames, Yusuf
Rating/Warnings: R, violence, disturbing imagery, symbolic references to canonical sexual assault (there's a common warning), Black Swan spoilers
Written for: [livejournal.com profile] book_las, prompt "[character] dreams about [character]." I am amazed that there weren't more Inception crossovers.
Wordcount: 750
A/N: I was going to build on this (hence the delay in posting) but I've gotten enough caught up in other projects that I don't think I will for a while. Also, it's been forever since I posted anything.

Sometimes Ariadne wonders if Lily can somehow sneak into dreams without a PASIV, without anything mechanical or any kind of effort at all.

It’s ridiculous, of course; impossible, insane. But still, the fact remains: Lily is there at Nina’s bedside every single time they drop into her dreams, and every single time, as they search and examine and try every trick in the book to figure out what happened to her, Lily shows up and slinks through the forests and skyscrapers to at the very least astonish them.

Investigating Nina started out as a pet project of Arthur’s, just a chance to look at an unusually arranged mind, but all of them are well and truly addicted to any kind of challenge. They will not stop sorting through her twisted strands until they work out her secrets or her coma ends. Nina’s dreams are, Arthur says, probably the strangest that Ariadne will ever see; Yusuf, once pried away from the endless reams of notes he’s making as he tries to fix the compounds, corroborates this analysis. Almost every last projection is a dancer; black, white, pink, blue, feathered and spangled and spiked, terrifying and lovely alike. And they never simply walk, never stay still, just trace leaps and lines and delicately curved arms without ever once glancing at anyone else. The dreamers stand out like sparrows amid butterflies, but the dancers have never turned on them except for the few times they’ve tried to blend in by sketching out brief clumsy steps.

Which isn’t to say they’re safe down there. Scarcely a week goes by without Ariadne shooting herself out after the director, Thomas Leroy, whirls her off into a twisted dance. It’s terrifying; it seems it’s meant to be visceral but she only trips and stumbles, yanked backwards and forwards and sideways by the fingers and the wrists. Tearing free, she’s discovered, gets her pulled back with bruising force; if she does manage to rip loose, the projections mob her without a moment’s pause, sprouting talons from their fingernails and clawing her to death. Eames, forging, gets the same treatment from Leroy. Immediately afterwards, he tells her quietly that she should never feel ashamed about escaping that as fast as possible. She has no idea what he says to Arthur about it, but the point man offers to let her stay out of the dreams if she prefers. She puts every obscenity in her vocabulary to carefully constructed use, throwing everything at Eames that she doesn’t spit at Arthur, and nobody brings it up again.

Ariadne isn’t the only one to have a rough time of it, nor is Leroy the only horror down there. Erica Sayers has smothered Arthur twenty-nine times by now; for some reason, he’s the favorite for her particular brand of attention. Sometimes it’s a drug-covered cloth over the face; sometimes it’s a pillow; occasionally she collapses the ceiling over him; once she kneecaps him, drags him off, and buries him alive. She’s terrifyingly strong; Ariadne and Eames have both been batted across the room like paper dolls when they try to pull her off of him.

Beth MacIntyre is probably the least violent of the killers; she drifts and dances half-attached, insubstantial even to the dreamworld’s unreality. Each flitter and step, vanishing around a corner, whispers delicately follow me; every several days, out of sheer desperation, they do. So far they’ve been lead off of ledges, across ice that snaps and plunges them into half-frozen oceans, onto ground that crumbles into landslides, and into yet more collapsing buildings. You’d think they’d learn, but Yusuf points out mercilessly that there’s a revelation in every way they die. Eames points out that Yusuf isn’t the one dying, barring the mornings when he’s without coffee.

There usually has been coffee lately - Lily, who spends at least an hour every day talking to the silent Nina and another hour in the corner with her headphones leaking tinny dance beats, has started coming by in the mornings and handing Starbucks cups around with wryly wistful whispers of good luck.

Lily has killed them more often than all the others put together.

Date: 2011-04-01 10:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kaitou-lili.livejournal.com
Oh! This is lovely! It's just gets under your skin...I adore the idea of them trying to go into her head and into her world which is so fragile, strange, and fierce.

Marvelous job! I adore this.

Date: 2011-04-01 10:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sour-idealist.livejournal.com
Wow, thank you so much! I had a ton of fun with the idea, and I'm really so glad that you like it, and that the Nina-dreamscape made sense to you. Thank y ou.

Date: 2011-04-01 11:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lexalanelk.livejournal.com
Wow! I didn't expect something like this. It's amazing. Honestly I never thought about an Inception/Black Swan crossover but this really blew me away. I love this.

Date: 2011-04-01 11:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sour-idealist.livejournal.com
Wow, thank you so much; I'm so glad that you thought I made the concept work. Thank you.

Date: 2011-04-02 12:56 am (UTC)
ext_34967: Celtic style letter A (Default)
From: [identity profile] anissa7118.livejournal.com
Even if it takes a year, I would LOVE to see you build on this. Masterfully crafted, and the ending packs one hell of a punch. Bravo!

Date: 2011-04-02 02:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sour-idealist.livejournal.com
Thank you so much, truly; I really cannot thank you enough for taking the time to comment, never mind for such a lovely one.

And I do want to build on it, but there's a ton of other things I want to do as well, so I'm not sure. If only I could just... write all day.

Date: 2011-04-02 07:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dj-rocca.livejournal.com
I echo anissa7118! This was amazing and dark and beautiful!

Date: 2011-04-02 08:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sour-idealist.livejournal.com
Again, wow, thank you so damn much.

Date: 2011-04-03 01:22 am (UTC)
ashen_key: (one two three all in a line)
From: [personal profile] ashen_key
Thirding. Oh, my, thirding so much. I haven't seen Black Swan yet (soooo wasn't in the headspace when it was out in theatres), but this is just...dark and creepy and amazing. It works perfectly as a stand-alone, but I really want more.

Date: 2011-04-03 08:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sour-idealist.livejournal.com
Eek, thank you so much!

Can I just ask how much of the story of Black Swan you already know about? I'm really curious about how much sense this makes without knowing what all of Nina's projections are about.

And I do have hopes for continuing it at some point. Hopefully I can dig out my notes for where I was going to go with it.

Date: 2011-04-04 02:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lily-sayers.livejournal.com
This is the good kind of peer pressure right here (I am the same person as anissa7118, or I'd claim fourthing). I put this story into my recommended reading links on my LJ page also - a lot of my www.fanfiction.net readers come over and find new stuff there, so hopefully you'll get a few more readers from it.

Date: 2011-04-04 03:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sour-idealist.livejournal.com
Really? Wow, thank you so much :D! I'm really more flattered than I can possibly say.

Date: 2011-04-04 03:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lily-sayers.livejournal.com
While we're all praising you to the skies, I may as well add that I've never seen Inception, had heard waaaaaaaaay too much about it when it first came out, and was pretty much sick of the mention of the film. Thanks to this fic, Inception is now in my Netflix queue.

Date: 2011-04-04 03:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sour-idealist.livejournal.com
I truly cannot thank you enough for everything that you've said. You've made my night, and probably my week; I'll be walking on air for ages. Thank you.

(And I really hope Inception doesn't disappoint! It's well-made, I think, and somewhat similar to Black Swan in tone; too many guys, though.)

Date: 2011-04-05 01:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lily-sayers.livejournal.com
I'm sure I'll love Inception. It was just that I heard sooooo much about it at a time when I couldn't actually see it for myself, and all the hype just got aggravating. It's my kind of film, from what I hear, so I'm looking forward to its arrival.

Date: 2011-04-04 01:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] erdbeerasche.livejournal.com
Oh, I always wanted to read something like this. Those two movies combined = perfection. It fits so well. The imagery is lovely and the end...wow.
I'd love to read it if you'd expand on it. it would be an amazing fanfic, I'm sure.

Date: 2011-04-04 02:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sour-idealist.livejournal.com
Thank you so, so much; I really cannot thank you enough for that.

A continuation is looking more and more appealing, and if I do get it written I'll definitely link it around. I'm thrilled that you think the idea has more potential.

Date: 2011-12-18 08:58 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
First of all, I've never seen Inception. Second of all, it absolutely didn't matter because the focus was so centered on the twisted world of Nina's mind. I loved that the metaphorical monsters of Nina's life were given literal interpretations.
The dance instructor who pushes her into sexualty becomes a dance-rapist. Her overbearing mother who shoved her own broken dreams down Nina's throat enjoys smothering people. Beth whose path Nina follows almost exactly to the letter, from being to the lead ballerina to a suicide attmept (though, really, Nina didn't attempt suicide. She attempted murder, and it just didn't quite work out...) and in the dream, those that follow her die.
And, ah, Lily. Lily who has killed them all more than any other. How to interpret that lovely tiddley bit. Obviously, Lily has played a major role in Nina's rapid descent into madness. She was in fact, the focal point of Nina's paranoia. Lily who was sabotaging her, was trying to steal her role, was sleeping with Thomas, and tried to kill her there at the end. But the shipper in me wants to believe that Lily is there for a more subtle and, to be quite honest, gay reason. I just haven't got the logistics worked out yet....lol.
And this turned out much larger than I'd intended. I just really wanted to tell you how amazing I thought this fic was and that I really hope you find the time/inspiration to continue it. It is simply lovely. Absolutely lovely.

Profile

sour_idealist: (Default)
sour_idealist

November 2025

S M T W T F S
      1
2345 678
9101112131415
16171819202122
23242526272829
30      

Most Popular Tags

Style Credit

Expand Cut Tags

No cut tags
Page generated Jan. 6th, 2026 04:36 pm
Powered by Dreamwidth Studios